What do you guys think of my new rap line?

[AlaskaHawks]

I'll treat you like my camera, because, when I click, you'll shutter (shudder).

Thanks in advance for any constructive criticism.

[Sudanese Sensation]

That was dope, dawg.

Or are those colloquialisms anachronistic?

[AlaskaHawks]

That was dope, dawg.

Or are those colloquialisms anachronistic?

Honestly don't know what "colloquialisms anachronistic" means.

[Sudanese Sensation]

That was dope, dawg.

Or are those colloquialisms anachronistic?

Honestly don't know what "colloquialisms anachronistic" means.

Do kids still use those terms?

Kids= anybody <25.

[AlaskaHawks]

That was dope, dawg.

Or are those colloquialisms anachronistic?

Honestly don't know what "colloquialisms anachronistic" means.

Do kids still use those terms?

Kids= anybody <25.

Not sure. I'm older than that though!

[Sudanese Sensation]

Honestly don't know what "colloquialisms anachronistic" means.

Do kids still use those terms?

Kids= anybody <25.

Not sure. I'm older than that though!

I know...

It's just that slang keeps changing...

For instance those in TDK's age group might have said your rap is the "bee's knees."

[AlaskaHawks]

Do kids still use those terms?

Kids= anybody <25.

Not sure. I'm older than that though!

I know...

It's just that slang keeps changing...

For instance those in TDK's age group might have said your rap is the "bee's knees."

Or that I'm a boss hog?

[Sudanese Sensation]

Not sure. I'm older than that though!

I know...

It's just that slang keeps changing...

For instance those in TDK's age group might have said your rap is the "bee's knees."

Or that I'm a boss hog?

Or the "cat's meow."

[AlaskaHawks]

I know...

It's just that slang keeps changing...

For instance those in TDK's age group might have said your rap is the "bee's knees."

Or that I'm a boss hog?

Or the "cat's meow."

Go ahead and tell me
You dirty yellow belly
The words in your lines
I'd like to see them defined

[dwcmwa]

Chicken Hawks, you are garbage son, garbage.

I would MURK you in a freestyle battle.

[AlaskaHawks]

Chicken Hawks, you are garbage son, garbage.

I would MURK you in a freestyle battle.

Ok